I'll honestly say I had lots of fun in the plot! Whether it was participating or reading, I got a nice feel of the overall combat and how each team member was reacting to each other (have to give a thumbs up to Allenby for kicking ass with me, and Trudy for scolding mr. hothead pilot here XD).

But I will say it got a bit confusing at times. Not to say a bit of re-reading on my part didn't fix that, but I can see where it might have become a jumble specially when big ol' Leviathan showed it's ugly face

Overall I thought the plot was awesome!